Tips on writing a good GP essay

We know the basic structure of PEEL; Point, elaborate, example, link back. But why are we still having low marks? I think I finally got it. GP essay, a typical platform to construct an effective argument that shows maturity and insightfulness. However, many people fail to realize that the problem lies with the misunderstanding of PEEL. It is not enough.

PEEL is the correct method to use, but weighing is also needed, and that can only be effectively achieved through the double PEEL. Teachers say must use PEEL but never say cannot use 2 PEEL in one paragraph. Content should be no problem for most of the students, but it is the structure that often kills one.

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The smallest PJCSBandee: Dolly 'The Sheep'
The one who likes to kajiao others: Kailing
The one who has the undisputably small eyes: Yap June Hao
The one who likes to eat 'Drumsticks': Shin Chieh
The quietess one but got lots of ideas one: Jasmine
The one who is always been made fun of: Idris
The one who always swears: Kai Shi
The one who always looks cool: Luqman
The very slow but kind one: Xuanyin
The 'PJCSB satellite': Josie
The 'PJCSB Andre Bocelli': Vivian
The successor to Tiny Eyes Title: Yee Le
The scouting tower 'The man': Illya
The PJCSB 'Mr Bean': Naing O.o
The Red Star awardist: Hong Xin
The Ladies Man: Ri Sheng
The 'Ahaha': Tasya
The quiet and blur blur one: Jia Ying
The queen's assistant: Hisyam
The fortune cat: Ying Tong
The 'PJCSB satellite dish': Sharon
The one who is 'Always up to no good': Munsyi
The church girl: Christine
The one who is over-exposed to sunshine: Huldah
The one who is the most stable: Dian
The one who always want to slap me: Dominique
The one that looks the most decent: Jia Jun

Grand finale; The most hihi, byebye, take care, za za one: KOH YI YAN!!!!!"

anyone who wants me to include him or her PLEASE TELL ME!!!!!

Busiest week this year

This week is undisputably the most hectic week for me. Monday came home at 7.30pm from art. Tuesday came home at 10.10pm from family matters. Wednesday came home at 10.10pm from College Day rehearsal. Thurday came home early 1.30pm but too tired, grabbed a 2.5 hrs nap. Friday came home at 9.30pm from College Day rehearsal. Today came home at 9.30pm from College Day.

In short, I have very little time for my hw especially when art unintentionally ate up everything. Besides the 1 hr econs remedial, I have hardly any time for revision of other subjects, ok frankly speaking, NONE.

Healthcare reforms in USA

The recent healthcare bill passed by President Obama directed its main use of taxes and leverages to provide more coverage of healthcare to the American citizens. However, what baffled me is why did some argued to reject the bill.

Healthcare as quoted in the statistics, was the biggest culprit of bankruptcy in America, 62%, the highest in the world apart from East Timor. People had to pay for their healthcare bills and sometimes, if it is not enough, you are forced to fork out everything you have. So, in this case, it seems like the rich are protesting against the taxes they need to pay in order to sustain the policy and the poor will benefit.

First of all, America is complicated. You've got that Wal-Mart asshole standing right in front of your doorstep that puts millions of Americans out of job, you also have the God-Knows-How-Much loans you can lend until the bank bankrupted before you, and now they are arguing that their money should not be spent to save those people?

I know there is definitely some good guys out there who work decent money but for those fucking rich people, I'm just glad they got their asses kicked.

"We should not pass this bill because for the sake of our American citizens in the future......" Just shut up and admit you're money faced.